Everyone was against me, I could never change any ones mind. Not even the littler kids. They were so scared about the beast! It sounded so realistic, i was starting to quiver. I wondered if the beast was real, or the little kids were just playing around.
But of course I hated Jack, all he said to me was "SHUT UP FATTY!". I was so officious when he called me that. It's even worse when i was called "Piggy" when i was younger. Ralph promised said he wouldn't call me that, but that changed. I used to call him my friend, but that also changed.
But of course I hated Jack, all he said to me was "SHUT UP FATTY!". I was so officious when he called me that. It's even worse when i was called "Piggy" when i was younger. Ralph promised said he wouldn't call me that, but that changed. I used to call him my friend, but that also changed.
We thought we should light a fire on top of the mountain, so it anyone comes to rescue us, they could find us. Everyone left in a nimble, except me and Ralph.
I found the conch shell half under the grainy sand. I thought "We couldn't leave without the conch" that's what we use to talk to each other with out interposing.
I found the conch shell half under the grainy sand. I thought "We couldn't leave without the conch" that's what we use to talk to each other with out interposing.
Me and Ralph started up the steep mountain. It was so windy, but it was so hot. It was so high up in the air. I totally forgot about my Asama and extremely afraid of heights. As i warped awkwardly around to see a beautiful view of the sparkling lagoon. I was about to tell Ralph to look at it, but he was being a party pooper and just wanted to go see his new best friend Jack.
I was holding the large pink-white colored conch shell so tight, i was losing circulation in my hands.
Ralph and i finally reached the top of the mountain. We found Jack and the little kids up there. We all were constituting ideas about how to light the fire on top or the mountain. We couldn't decide on how to. But then i noticed, my glasses reflection on the grainy stone in front of me.
I had the conch shell and i was aloud to speak, but stupid old Jack said while he was smiling in a scornfully way "You cant talk, even thought u have the conch shell, it only works down there, u cant talk up here". I mean, how rude was that? But at that moment, i could call Ralph my friend because he stood up for me. He smiled in a polite way and said. "I am the leader of this group and the conch shell can be used anywhere, not just down there" as he looked down the mountain.
It was irresistible to not say no, to when i can become a life savor, if i light this fire, then everyone would me nice to me. I gently took of my glasses and wiped them off on my dirty blue T - shirt. I heard a little tumult noise in the background, it was Jack throwing a tantrum in back of me. I faced them towards the sun and it began a little spark. And another, and another....
WE HAVE FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!
Ralph and i finally reached the top of the mountain. We found Jack and the little kids up there. We all were constituting ideas about how to light the fire on top or the mountain. We couldn't decide on how to. But then i noticed, my glasses reflection on the grainy stone in front of me.
I had the conch shell and i was aloud to speak, but stupid old Jack said while he was smiling in a scornfully way "You cant talk, even thought u have the conch shell, it only works down there, u cant talk up here". I mean, how rude was that? But at that moment, i could call Ralph my friend because he stood up for me. He smiled in a polite way and said. "I am the leader of this group and the conch shell can be used anywhere, not just down there" as he looked down the mountain.
It was irresistible to not say no, to when i can become a life savor, if i light this fire, then everyone would me nice to me. I gently took of my glasses and wiped them off on my dirty blue T - shirt. I heard a little tumult noise in the background, it was Jack throwing a tantrum in back of me. I faced them towards the sun and it began a little spark. And another, and another....
WE HAVE FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!
1 comment:
Katie-
Good job but check the usage of some of the words. Also can you deal with "u" and "i"? And can you tell me about the little one with the birth mark? It is a really important event so I want to know Piggy's reaction. Keep up the good work.
-Emma
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