Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Blog 13: Revision of Blog 8: Rewind in a Heaven

Black: Changes made

As I awoke, not remembering what happened before I......I couldn't say it, i couldn't believe all of them did that to me.
I started to jump from cloud to cloud. I wanted to rewind the whole story over. So I can see exactly what happened.
I stared down at the small island, I could see Jack and his tribe parting and eating like pigs, actually, they were eating a pig. I wondered what would happen to Jack's tribe next.
But also at the same time, while Piggy and Ralph are back on the island being so tired and at a slow
steadfast pace, I could also see my home at war.
I remember standing on the mountain, just staring at the Lord Of The Flies. He was talking like he was the devil. The whole time, i was thinking "What happens Next?" I know he warned me about the dangers upon the island and inside the other boys.

As i was waking up, from being unconscious, I started to walk up he steep and risk taking mountain. I was getting closer and closer. I could hear a annoying ruffle or something caught on a branch. I opened my drowsy eyes and I saw, what it looked like some kind of parachute. I panicked and for a second, i thought it was the beastie. But i took a closer look and it was a dead man. I should have known, that was a sign.
If only i could have put my fears of that pig aside and listened i would still be alive. i could have proved that the beastie was a fake. i had proof that it was just some man who seemed to have a cloth attached to his back. i would have ended this whole silly divide in groups. Cant they not all see that Jack controlling everyone of them?
I had to go and tell the other boys, that there was no beastie and it was some kind of dead man. But Jack being the corrupt guy he is, he would never believe me.
The pig smelled tastier and tastier, so I knew i was getting closer and closer.
My eye's suddenly shut and I didn't know what was going on. All i could hear was "KILL THE BEAST! CUT HIS THROAT! SPILL HIS BLOOD!"
As my mind exploded with good and bad memories, i felt my last real tear drop
trickle down my cut face.
It was tremendous , I felt like the whole world was in the palm of my sweaty hands. I knew this was the end. I never thought dying would be so painful inside and out.


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