Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Blog 14: Revision of Blog 9: Attack From Sight

Black: Changes Made

As i awoke, i could see the morning sun rising over the horizon. It reflected off the loud crashing waves, in a
phosphorescence and delightful way. But that was about the only thing I could see without my glasses.
The morning after ....it happened, Ralph and I were chatting about how it happened. Well,it was difficult to remember, since we both weren't there.
Ralph and I kept on arguing about if it was an accident or murder. I mean, it was that creepy dance and we were all scared. We both just lied and said we were our of the circle.
Jack and his hunters were the ones who did it. Ralph and I didn't do it, we were out of the circle.
Well, i wasn't sure if they did it on accident or on purpose. Because we were all scared, it was dark and we thought it was the beastie. I couldn't help myself but to be
gesticulate. What if it was on purpose? I mean Jack is taking over this island. But maybe it was an accident.
Well after that awkward conversation with Ralph, we planned to go to bed.

Flash Back =( blue witting)

"Did you hear that?" Ralph whispered to me. i didn't hear anything so i nodded 'no' to him. He then told me to keep on listening for a while. I then heard a those creepy noise's like in a scary movie. Next, a horrible voice coming from outside the hut. I wondered to myself, what it was? It could only be 2 things, 1. The Beastie or 2. Jack and the savages.
But I was pretty sure, it was THE BEASTIE!

"Piggy...Where are you? PIGGY!!" The scary thing said. I was very shuddered and frightened, cause i thought it was the beastie. But a question popped in my head....how would the Beastie know my name? But i wasn't worried about that right now.

Then, it attacked us! i didn't know what for but what i did know was that i couldn't let it push me around. It was pitch black dark, so i couldn't see anything. I got on my knee's and felt around till I sat again something solid.
My asthma caused me to stifle and make me a little woozy. I was tried to escape, but somebody was smothering me as they lay on top of me and beat me over and over.
It wasn't until the morning when i realized it wasn't the Beastie, it was stupid old Jack and the Hunters.
At first I thought he was coming for the conch but after they fought us and kicked and punched I realized that he only came for my specs. I stood up from where I lay and felt my face with blood smothered all under my nose.

I was very shocked when i found out Jack and his Hunters took them! First they had to kill Simon and now they had to sabatoge me by taking my glasses. I cant believe what Jack has become, but I wont be able to help.

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