As i awoke, i could see the morning sun rising over the horizon. It reflected off the loud crashing waves, in a phosphorescence and delightful way. But that was about the only thing I could see without my glasses.The morning after ....it happened, Ralph and I were chatting about how it happened. Well,it was difficult to remember, since we both weren't there. Jack and his hunters were the ones who did it. Ralph and I didn't do it, we were out of the circle.
Well, i wasn't sure if they did it on accident or on purpose. Because we were all scared, it was dark and we thought it was the beastie. I couldn't help myself but to be gesticulate. What if it was on purpose? I mean Jack is taking over this island. But maybe it was an accident.
Well after that awkward conversation with Ralph, we planned to go to bed.
Flash Back =( blue witting)
"Did you hear that?" Ralph whispered to me. i didn't hear anything so i nodded 'no' to him. He then told me to keep on listening for a while. I then heard a those creepy noise's like in a scary movie. Next, a horrible voice coming from outside the hut.
"Piggy...Where are you? PIGGY!!" The scary thing said. I was very shuddered and frightened, cause i thought it was the beastie. But a question popped in my head....how would the Beastie know my name? But i wasn't worried about that right now.
Then, it attacked us! i didn't know what for but what i did know was that i couldn't let it push me around. It was pitch black dark, so i couldn't see anything. I got on my knee's and felt around till I sat again something solid.
My asthma caused me to stifle and make me a little woozy. I was tried to escape, but somebody was smothering me as they lay on top of me and beat me over and over.
It wasn't until the morning when i realized it wasn't the Beastie, it was stupid old Jack and the Hunters.
At first I thought he was coming for the conch but after they fought us and kicked and punched I realized that he only came for my specs. I stood up from where I lay and felt my face with blood smothered all under my nose.
I was very shocked when i found out Jack and his Hunters took them! First they had to kill Simon and now they had to sabatoge me by taking my glasses. I cant believe what Jack has become, but I wont be able to help.
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But a question popped in my head....how would the Beastie know my name? But i wasn't worried about that right now.
I really liked how you added in this sentence it showed what was going through Piggy's head while they were stealing his glasses, and how confused he was.
Maybe you could add a bit about why Piggy thought the conversation with Ralph was awkward, what did they talk about?
I really enjoyed reading this blog because you added in alot of details that made the story really interesting, like how you included Piggy's view on the danceat Jacks camp.
wow this was really good i like a lot how you made a flash back and did that it was really clever. there were also a few were small corections needed to be made and i like the last paragraph a lot so yea it was really good katie
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