Kill the pig! Cut his throat! Bash him in! Those intense words kept running over and over in my head, as if a broken record player. It made me feel strong and brave. As all that was happening, i just felt wild and i can do anything.
When we were surrounding Robert, i totally forgot that he was a human, i thought he was a wild animal that we found in a covert. I wanted to stick the spear right through his heart and watch him suffer.
I pushed through some of the boys to get in closer to the game. Actually, it had gone a little to far to call it a game. Jack pretended to cut his throat. I could tell in Jack angry eyes that he also forgot that he was a human being and not a harmless pig.
I think Jack is a good hunter and I also like his personality. He is uncom promising in his desire to hunt and kill innocent pigs. Well, that is the most important thing to him.
Its really infuriating that Ralph mixing up all our plans. And that keeps us away from hunting time. I mean, we don't really need shelter and i don't think the signal fire helps us.
We are on this awesome adventure with infinite opportunities to have fun!
Later, Ralph, Jack and I wanted to go see the beastie for ourselves. We were about to all climb the mountain when Jack was his old brave self and was talking about how he was already going to kill it.
We got to almost the top of the mountain and me and Ralph stopped for a second or tow.
Ralph was being a coward and didn't want to go any further then that point. I was about to go with Jack, but my head was spinning and i felt like i just had a hang over. So i stayed with Ralph at the bottom waiting for Jack to come back with the news about the beastie.
In the corner, i could hear Ralph snivel about how he want to get rescued. I thought to myself, at this point, he wanted to get saved, we might die tonight if the beast follows Jack.
Jack came running back and he was talking sagely about how he saw the beastie and he looked kind of like an ape. Now it's dark and we might just make a huge blunder by blindly walking right into the beast's lair.
As i hoped, there is a beast, and that means somehow and sometime.....there is something to kill out there!
3 comments:
I really liked how you opened your entry with this description. it really grabbed my attention and made we want to keep reading.
"Those intense words kept running over and over in my head, as if a broken record player" I like how you compared roger's thoughts to a record player, it really gave the reading an idea of what was going thorugh his head.
I think it would be really interesting if you described Roger's reaction to seeing the beast on top of the hill, and what he thinks it is.
i also liked how you started this with there chant. and also the way you used all the words was really good they all flowed very well and gave great descrptions and what not.
i think you could improve the descrption when they get on top of the hill and end this beter but otherwise it was very exceptional>
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